Dreaming of Dawn

So here is the first go at chapter four. It's VERY rough because I'm starting to integrate the previous stuff into this chapter. I'm working towards the title - showing the diaspora of all the girls and guys to different planets, before we start chasing each other all over the solar system ;)

So, I got it finished...amazing no?

The beginning of this chapter is set pretty well, but I still have a large chunk of the end to work on, the odie and dido scene is still very rough, and the sera and the queen scene is really choppy.

I've been going through and lightly editing these, typos and the like

A reposting of my favorite work, that I should work on more